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Unbroken Chapter One
~Summer 1998~
It was a warm sunny day, the kind of day you'd like to sit back, drink lemonade, and try to get a tan by the ocean's waves. The breeze was light and the sky was blue. It was a good day. I however, had business to take care of.
I sat alone in my sandbox, waiting. Waiting for my best friend like I did every afternoon. Today, our mission was to build the biggest sand castle anyone on our entire block had ever seen. Within minutes, I saw the shadow of a girl wander into my backyard. I turned around and glanced at my best friend, Hollie. She had her hands behind her back, and there were tears streaming down her face.
"What's wrong?" I called as I slid out of the sandbox and ran toward her.
As soon as I reached her, her crying got worse. I immediately wrapped my arms around her and embraced her in a hug as best as I could.
"Get off me," she mumbled.
I nodded, deciding it was best to give her space. She led me to the sandbox and we sat along the edge. She ran her hands through t
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Literature
Zombies
The dead stumble into the night
Empty graves left open
Under the moons eerie light
The smell of brains is potent
Horrified Screams pierce through the air
Ghastly figures roar through the town
On destructive paths, no one knows where
Terrified beings dragged to the ground
With blood, they'll paint the morning skies
Killing everything in sight
Under the silver-lit moon, it's no surprise
The undead will win the fight
Everyone becomes a mortal foe
Civil war in the streets
If you have fear, don't let it show
The zombies plot is almost complete
Pain and agony in every shout
They ignore their merciful cries
The human race they will wipe out
An promise you can't deny
Crimson eyes wathing the wicked
The chaos is quickly spread
Murder is a plague being transmitted
As if the streets were paved in red
The population has decreased
The battle was won
Now they will return to peace
For the bloody war was done
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Literature
Martian Queen and Amy WongCommission
It was a clear, cloudless night. The moon was full, and there was a slight breeze. Everything was perfect. Amy Wong and the Martian Queen were slow dancing to a soft tune on the beach. The waves were crashing against the rocks and you could feel the love in the air. This was their favorite place to be with each other.
Amy looked deep into Martian Queen's eyes. They were a majestic purple, and she could get lost in them at any given moment. She gazed at her with a lovestruck smile on her face, everything felt so right.
They each swayed gently to the music, the wind breezing through both of their hair. Martian Queen's grip on Amy's waist tightened, and she pulled her closer, inhaling her perfume.
"This is so romantic," Amy whispered into her ear, "Everything feels so right with you."
"I know sweetie, this is perfect."
"I have a question," Amy said.
"What's that?" Martian Queen asked.
"What makes you fall in love with me?"
"The dates we go on, especially here, at the beach. I love how the
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Literature
Heaven's Eyes (Rewritten)
Sights that can devour a person whole
Eyes, the gateway to Heaven's soul
When you look into them, you see nothing but an angel's face
So alarming it could send you to that special place
The place where you imagine, discover and dream
Or the place where the monster lurks and you scream
There are some eyes you never will forget
They'll leave you scared and full of regret
Other's were made to mesmerize
While many seduce you in lies
Love isn't always black and blue
Our actions speak louder than words do
It's not always about the touch we feel
Give it time, all wounds will heal
Gentle eyes that reveal the truth
Monstrous glares tearing apart youth
Angel eyes with a precious face
Heaven's gates are open with her grace
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Literature
Love Haiku
A racing heartbeat
Thoughts about him flood my head
There's no one better
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Literature
Opportunity Part 2
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Looking in the small lake outside the cabin, I checked the chainmail I was wearing. Perfectly straight- I have to make them think I've been doing this my whole life, not just since last Saturday.
Slowly kneeling, I draw the sword and take a deep breath. Come on, Megan, I told myself. You can do this. You can!
Raise the sword, bring it down on the hair. Hack it off!
I did. Now I was a boy.
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I looked down at my frowning reflection in the lake. This was it, I couldn't change it. This was the only way to prove to myself and the world, that I had what it takes. I could make a difference. If being a girl was a factor indicating that I couldn't make a change, well this is their slap in the face. A new life was sailing to me on the horizon, I wouldn't miss this opportunity, and I won't give it up for anything.
I splashed some of the cold water onto my face, as if I was waking up to reality. Now I would have to think, breathe, and live like a boy. No turni
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Literature
Heaven's Eyes
Sights that can devour a person whole
Eyes, the gateway to Heaven's soul
When you look into them, you see nothing but an angel's face
So alarming it could send you to that special place
The place where you imagine, discover and dream
Or the place where the monster lurks and you scream
There are some eyes you never will forget
They'll leave you scared and full of regret
Other's will mesmerize you
The power only eyes can do
Love isn't always black and blue
Our actions speak louder than we do
It's not always about the touch we feel
Give it time, wounds will heal
Gentle eyes that kill with kindness
While monster's are left in the blindness
Angel eyes with a precious face
Heaven's gates are open with her grace
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Literature
When the Tightrope Snaps
I close my eyes and count to ten
Think of happy places I've been
I look one more time before I take that first step
Open my mouth for the last time, this is my final breath
It's like seeing the world for the first time
I'm walking a tightrope, the super thin line
My fear's nothing but beneath me
Society's staring in awe, what a sight to see.
I have no feelings, they've all slipped away
This is the part where black and white fade to gray
Sickened, I stumble, waving my arms in fright
I guess my downfall was everyone else's delight.
In a blink, the rope snapped in two
A horror I never thought I knew
I broke away from society
The riskiest choice I'd ever had to do.
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Literature
She Will Be Loved Chapter Three
For the next few days, James pretty much ignored her. She was downstairs one morning, making breakfast for him. It had been gloomy the past few days, but this morning it was bright and sunny. She called his name for his breakfast was finished. He stumbled into the kitchen and plopped himself up at the table. She laid down the plate in front of him.
"Thanks," he mumbled. She simply nodded and sat across from him, shaking/
They hadn't really talked since her mother's death. He had slapped her a few times, but she was still scared. She was too scared to ask for anything.
"You're going to have to do some errands today," he said quietly. "I wrote down a list," he fumbled with his pocket and passed her a dirty piece of paper. She read down the list.
It was basic stuff, like milk, eggs, bread, and butter. She had to wash the car, and go to the laundromat. "After you do the dishes, head out. I expect you home by dinner."
Astounded that she had so much time, she was ecstatic. She would have tim
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She Will Be Loved Chapter Two
She laid in bed that night with a blank expression on her face. James and his drinking buddies were watching Monday night football. Her breathing was light and uneven. She was still horrified about what had happened earlier. It had began to rain. She listen to the soft pitter-patter of each drop. She was almost asleep when she heard a knock on the door. Following James' usual orders, she scrambled out of bed and rushed to the door.
There were three young boys standing on the doorstep with a stretcher and a body bag. She glanced over their shoulders and saw the black hearse parked in her driveway. They were from the funeral home down the road, and had come to pick up her mother.
"Is James Randolph here?" asked the boy with blond hair.
She nodded and covered her mouth. She held open the door a bit wider so the boys could come inside.
"Just follow me," she said. "You don't want to get caught up with him."
Hesitating, she showed the boys where her mom's room was.
"Please, wait here for one
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This is beautiful(: I love how the sky seems to overpower the rest of the picture. I also like how the sky is all gray and dark except ...


This is beautiful. I love how you can't see her face, it's mysterious! The whole picture flows well, like the curtains, her dress, and ...


I think this is lovely! I love the colors of her, and in the background, they blend great! I love her outfit, and the expression on her...


The proportions of the face aren't right. You could also use some work in shading. The eyes could use more detail. I do like the shape ...

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Hey guys, I haven't written a journal entry in like a year, so I figured I'd write one. I just created a new Deviantart account: breeziexx.deviantart.com/
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Hello, everyone! My name is Brittany and welcome to my deviantART page! I'm seventeen, I live in New Hampshire and I love to read and write!

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have a llama :)
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Wow, thank you for the watch and very much for the points!
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I would like to personally welcome you to the House Of Fallen Angels. Please feel free to add anything that you have made that is BVB related!!! I hope you enjoy your stay here with us! We have a monthly Challenge that when we have enough participants gives out prizes to the winners!!! It starts at the beginning of each month and continues until 11:59 on the last day of the month. You can view the details of the challenge on the group home page on the left side. Sit back and have a look around!!!
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:la: I tagged you :)
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i meant mine xD
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I was trying to find the first chapter of Saviour, but I've looked through your whole gallery and I can't find anything!!! :-( Could you link me to the first chapter or tell me how I can find it?
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